For writing we had to write about something we did in the holidays. I went to the movies and this is my writing.
When we got to the movie place, we were all really excited. Aunty got our tickets and told us we were going to watch Transformers. She also got us some popcorn, ice cream and drinks. YUM!!!!
During the movie there was lots of swearing in it. I didn’t like it when Optimus Prime was swearing. I enjoyed the movie heaps even though it had lots of bad words in it.
My favourite part of the movie was when the Autobots were fighting against the Decepticons to stop them from destroying the Earth. Optimus Prime got stabbed and I felt scared that they wouldn’t win the fight. Lucky the Autobots were too strong and in the end they saved the Earth.
When the movie finished I was feeling really tired, but I was also happy that we got to do something exciting during the holidays. We walked outside to go home. It was dark as, Aunty said “when you get home, you go straight to bed.” I couldn’t wait to get home and go to sleep.
I hope Aunty will take us to the movies in the next holidays.
Awesome story Promise. Nice work describing how it was dark outside and that the food was Yum.
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